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The Boogeyman

The Boogeyman
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

He’s a creepy and crawly shadow from the light,
     squeamy and haughty who awakes in the night.

Screams from the child who becomes afraid,
     poor Andy cries out but on his bed he does stay.

Then he quietly wanders to the closet in wonder,
     then the lightning strikes with robust thunder,

For lil’ Andy can’t see through the door,
     but hears the boogeyman screech and roar.

Stalking the boy, Andy hides under his bed,
     terrified that his father will wake up instead.

Heeding and shaking with hands over his mouth,
     he listens in terror seeing footsteps arouse.

Poor Andy, knew it was to be true,
     for earlier his father beat him black and blue.

More terrified of him than the boogeyman,
     he hurried from under the bed and he ran.

Father caught him before he could get far,
     in the mirror Andy saw on his face a scar.

See, father was worse than shadows in the night,
     and his mother knew all along she was right.

A strike from a belt buckle across his bottom,
     but a shadow flew in fast and got him.

Father had vanished before Andy’s eyes,
     that boogeyman had been wearing a disguise.

Big brother Josh had been very protective,
     for his brother Andy had been very neglected.

See, the boogeyman wasn’t scary after all,
     but an angel catching him every time he did fall.

No longer will that big mean man be a bother,
     Josh saved Andy from the wrath of his father.

Date Written: May 25, 2016 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Daniel Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 2:52 AM
Congratulations on a fine placement, Laura:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 12:43 PM
A great tale of brotherly protection and love. Congratulations on your well deserved top win Laura. #7. ; )Somehow I am not able to post regularly. Sorry for the piggy back comment on Jo's Laura. ; )
Scars Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:11 AM
thank you Jo :)-luloo
Davey Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 7:43 PM
I don't know how you did it but you made this boogeyman rhyme cute! I never assoc. cute with him until now! Congrats for the contest
Scars Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 11:09 AM
thank you Brian :)-luloo
Negron Flores Avatar
June 2, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest
Scars Avatar
June 3, 2016 at 6:43 AM
thank you Nayda :)-luloo
Allison Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 6:14 AM
Its lovely to hear to audio with the poem you have done a great job good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Scars Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Thank you Jan :)-luloo
Daniel Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 5:24 AM
God bless the big brother:) loved your deep write:)
Scars Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:58 AM
Thank you John :)-luloo
Richards Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 4:49 PM
Such an excellent poem, and you are doing such a great job with the new audio format. Well done in both areas, Laura!
Scars Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Thank you Carrie :)-luloo
Heemstra Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Brother helping brother, nice writing!
Scars Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Thank you Robert-luloo
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