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The Boogeyman

The Boogeyman
"Lay your head down child I won't let the Boogeyman come" another infamous Tool ballad blares out of the speakers. "Go back to sleep, go back to sleep..." James (now 14) hits the power button and says to himself Ha! There ain't no boogeyman in my closet anymore! Kids stuff! Then turns out the light for the night... An hour or so passes, the wind blows erratically outside... The bedroom window is open just a crack... just enough so the wind ruffles the curtains... and brings the chill of the night in with it... James wakes up about then wondering why he shivers because right about then the wind completely died He looks to the window, shrugs, gets up and closes it As he turns around it hit him again, the chill with no wind... He shakes his head to rid himself of this eerie feeling Cracks his neck a couple of times and laughs, weakly Come on stud you're a big boy what are you scared of "Lay your head down child I won't let the Boogeyman come" Now laying back in bed that Tool song repeating in his head over, and over, and over, again, it won't stop He's starting to get uneasy, along comes another chill That awful feeling when something bad is crawling up your spine... Then suddenly his closet door creeks open just a crack What the !*%?, instinctively he pulls his sheets up to his chin Now he's freaking, shaking, perspiring, and watching but nothing comes out, why won't it just come out... "Lay your head down child I won't let the Boogeyman come" Now he hears a faint something, a soft scratching What the hell is happening, he whispers I didn't do anything Then in his head he heard, "Not believe in me", it's coming... All of a sudden the door fly's open and James screams uncontrollably screams while wriggling in his sheets Yelling Please don't hurt me, please I believe, I believe Then his cat Jester jumps up onto the middle of his chest... Poor James just about had a heart attack and peed his pants right in his bed as Jester starts purring and licking his face No it can't be? It was, James accidently shut Jester in the closet "Lay your head down child I won't let the Boogeyman come" He never listened to that song ever again...
05/24/16

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Date: 6/5/2016 5:42:00 PM
Congratulations! Fun write!
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Date: 6/3/2016 12:28:00 PM
Great story telling Brian! I loved the ending. Congratulations on a very deserving first place win! #7 ; )
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Date: 6/3/2016 2:50:00 AM
Scary narrative...glad you got the first place:) Well deserved:) Congratulations, Brian:)
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Brian Davey
Date: 6/3/2016 5:49:00 AM
Many thanks I am always appreciative of an honor of winning a contest and of positive comments like yours!
Date: 6/3/2016 1:32:00 AM
Congratulation and really i like the formation of the poetic story telling style.
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Brian Davey
Date: 6/3/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and I am glad you enjoyed it
Date: 6/2/2016 9:33:00 PM
Well done Brian, congratulations...
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Brian Davey
Date: 6/3/2016 5:47:00 AM
Thank you Charlie
Date: 6/2/2016 6:50:00 PM
Congratulations Brian on the first placement of the Boogeyman contest
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Brian Davey
Date: 6/2/2016 7:40:00 PM
Thank you very much Nayda
Date: 5/26/2016 1:12:00 PM
This gave me an unsettling feeling, even with the humorous ending. Great pent up suspense that exploded in something mundane ... or perhaps something more? First I read from this contest, but definitely a good one, Brian.
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/26/2016 6:03:00 PM
Thank you Timothy I think we were all scared of the Boogeyman one time or another and had some sort of closet incident with him too.
Date: 5/24/2016 2:35:00 PM
Excellent take on the theme, Brian...held me till the end! Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/25/2016 2:27:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words Sandra
Date: 5/24/2016 1:31:00 PM
how eerie and splendidly quilled.. i was on my toes till the end,brian... smashing!..huggs
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/25/2016 2:27:00 AM
I am so happy that you enjoyed it!
Date: 5/24/2016 12:18:00 PM
you built up the suspense brilliantly Brian - love the ending to the tale:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Brian Davey
Date: 5/25/2016 2:26:00 AM
Thank you very much I hope Nayda likes it just as much, have a wonderful evening

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