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The Bogeyman

Soaking wet the grey sheep huddle by the stone wall shaped and laid to last five hundred more years still. Rains sheeting o'er the moor leave us dripping as the fish in Foley's Tarn. Clouds careen across the sky like ragged flags unfurling, our house is battered by the storm's relentless wrath, and something's coming... It's nights like this that bring the creature from the other side of time, misshapen wretch with no measure of humanity, dragging its loathsome body to our door. Squelching abomination with dark sockets for its eyes, a travesty of decency and grace. Not marked in any almanac, no picture of this beast save in the nightmares of our child, who flies into his mother's arms and trembles, trying to scrape the ugly specter from his mind, for he knows... he can feel the slimy presence hidden deep within the shadows of the house. Is it living only in his darkest fears? Once settled is he free of fang and claw? "Leave a light on, Mom!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/16/2016 8:10:00 PM
This haunting imagery creates the perfect atmosphere for a tale of suspense... I liked this poem very much, Keith. Very well written!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/16/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thanks so much for your time and effort in reviewing this piece... I am most grateful. Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/15/2016 11:36:00 AM
My Goodness, yes leave a light on! Awesome piece Keith, the beast is well described yet gives imagination provision to conjure up its own ghastly image.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/15/2016 1:50:00 PM
Thanks for your cool review my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/15/2016 11:20:00 AM
put fear in the rear....and pain on the train....then extradite to His Light....then only joy will remain....creepy cool keith....
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/15/2016 1:51:00 PM
Rhyming in response as ever from your talented pen! Thanks Eric... Best wishes, Keith

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