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The Boat

the boat to heaven
roving arcanum of life
have truth at the wheel.

boatheaventruthsenryu

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Aditi Mishra

June 17, 2020 at 4:22 AM

This is a brilliant senryu Jenish! Keep writing and inspiring :)

Jenish Somadas

June 17, 2020 at 11:45 PM

Thank you Adiiti for your kind words..

Gershon Wolf

June 13, 2020 at 10:31 PM

Zap! This is surely a zinger of a senryu, my friend (esp. now that I've looked up 'arcanum')! Bravo, Jenish! Cheers, gw

Jenish Somadas

June 14, 2020 at 12:46 AM

Thank you Gershon for your kind words.. Stay safe..

Andrea Dietrich

June 13, 2020 at 6:17 PM

a boat to heaven might mean the sky is a sea of blue!! Cool, Jenish!

Jenish Somadas

June 14, 2020 at 12:45 AM

Lol.. Thank you Andrea.. I'm delighted to know you like it..

Paghunda Zahid

June 13, 2020 at 1:48 PM

Truth guides us to heavy... Well written!

Jenish Somadas

June 14, 2020 at 12:44 AM

Thank you Paghunda..

Shirley Hawkins

June 12, 2020 at 9:55 PM

I had to look up the meaning of the word arcanum before I understood the beauty of your Senryu. It's encouraging to know that behind the scenes after much searching we are all being guided to the truth... So cleverly expressed, thank you, Jenish

Jenish Somadas

June 14, 2020 at 12:43 AM

Thank you Shirley.. Truth is the guide and the path to........