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The Boat

the boat to heaven roving arcanum of life have truth at the wheel.

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/17/2020 4:22:00 AM

This is a brilliant senryu Jenish! Keep writing and inspiring :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/17/2020 11:45:00 PM

Thank you Adiiti for your kind words..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/13/2020 10:31:00 PM

Zap! This is surely a zinger of a senryu, my friend (esp. now that I've looked up 'arcanum')! Bravo, Jenish! Cheers, gw

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/14/2020 12:46:00 AM

Thank you Gershon for your kind words.. Stay safe..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2020 6:17:00 PM

a boat to heaven might mean the sky is a sea of blue!! Cool, Jenish!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/14/2020 12:45:00 AM

Lol.. Thank you Andrea.. I'm delighted to know you like it..

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 6/13/2020 1:48:00 PM

Truth guides us to heavy... Well written!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/14/2020 12:44:00 AM

Thank you Paghunda..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 6/12/2020 9:55:00 PM

I had to look up the meaning of the word arcanum before I understood the beauty of your Senryu. It's encouraging to know that behind the scenes after much searching we are all being guided to the truth... So cleverly expressed, thank you, Jenish

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/14/2020 12:43:00 AM

Thank you Shirley.. Truth is the guide and the path to........

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/12/2020 7:55:00 PM

Great one Jenish! Truth at the wheel :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/14/2020 12:41:00 AM

Thank you Heidi.. God bless you with good health..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/12/2020 7:43:00 AM

Splendid Senryu. Heavenly expressed dearest, Jenish. Bravo!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/14/2020 12:40:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios.. Your poems are my inspirations..

Beata Agustin

Date: 6/12/2020 7:32:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/14/2020 12:39:00 AM

Thank you Beata.. And thank you for your gorgeous entry..

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/12/2020 7:07:00 AM

Awesome message, Jenish.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 6/14/2020 12:38:00 AM

Thank you Vijay...