The Bluest Sky

I search for sparrrows in bluest sky, and toss my heartache into the wind. But from the blue, to my dismay, the cold wind blows it back again. Then from Heaven's breath, my wide eyes see a sparrow and a friend, and a voice calls out from bluest sky, "forgive and make amends".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "#192" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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August 1, 2012 at 12:42 AM
CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD
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July 29, 2012 at 10:25 PM
RHONDA..I love YOUR AWESOME WIN..., a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS...GOODNIGHT;-) PD
Murray Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 7:03 PM
Congrats. on you 1st place winner. A wonderful msg. enclosed within Anne
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July 29, 2012 at 1:39 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win - JH
Muzzey Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 9:38 AM
Congratulations Rhonda, on a wonderful write and 1st place win. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Song Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 6:48 AM
I guess this means don't bring your petitions b4 heaven until your own issues are dealt with...this is a great image to convey the spiritual message...Very amazed at its beauty! gwendolen
May Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 4:55 PM
congrats on your first place finish Rhonda
Richards Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 2:47 PM
Not only a beautiful poem in lovely description, but a wonderful message to hold! Perfectly done, Rhonda!
Liwayway Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 1:28 PM
congrats!!! keep up the good wook! :)
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July 28, 2012 at 1:07 PM
Great poem!
Williams Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 1:07 PM
Rhonda congrats on another win, your pen is flowing very nicely here,,,David
Sweetheart Avatar
July 26, 2012 at 9:30 AM
a powerful piece Rhonda.. the last line serves us all so well luv.. forgiveness is the start of blessings galore.. luv this one..
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July 25, 2012 at 4:50 PM
Wonderful life lesson on forgiveness, Rhonda...a true gem - Tim
Hu Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 11:25 PM
Cute poem wid so much of depth
Merryman Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 7:11 PM
This is a wonderful poem, Rhonda! I enjoyed reading it very much. Love, Kim
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 5:55 PM
what a lovely message inside this little gem, Rhonda. Much enjoyed!
Sivey Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 3:29 PM
This is such a true write my friend! I believe what you have said wholeheartedly! I really enjoyed what you have written! Great Work!!
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July 24, 2012 at 11:07 AM
Rhonda my friend...beautiful again!!!! :) -oxox love Anne-Lise
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July 24, 2012 at 10:59 AM
This is a beautiful piece, Rhonda. I am going to save it on my favorites list and show it to my wife...she will LOVE it!
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July 24, 2012 at 9:01 AM
not only is this dreamy, it's heavenly...enjoyed the flow and content of the work, rhonda.. well woven message of love and forgiveness!... :) huggs!
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