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The Bluest Rose

To one who stands alone my long gaze goes. How dignified she poses here, and quite unique and lovely is the bluest rose! Apart from where one very large bush grows so lush with other roses pink and bright, to one who stands alone my long gaze goes. Some lavender upon her petals shows its hue of dreams and mystical delight! Unique and lovely is the bluest rose. Above the bush of blues, when a breeze blows, She dwarfs them all, face lifting to the light. To one who stands alone my long gaze goes. The trials she has weathered, no one knows but I alone; I know her secret plight. Unique and lovely is the bluest rose. As purple streaks the sky, life’s fast pace slows, and day begins to drift into the night. To one who stands alone my long gaze goes. Unique and lovely is the bluest rose. Written June 13, 2016 for the Villanelle Me A Flower or Flowers - Poetry Contest of Broken Wings
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Mcgee Avatar
June 27, 2019 at 9:39 PM
This is so deserving of the win. I've always wanted to try a Villanelle. A masterpiece, I think Andrea.
Ashley Avatar
June 26, 2019 at 4:28 PM
Unique and lovely is your captivating poem, Andrea. I so enjoyed this masterful piece. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Adams Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 12:22 PM
Lovely Villanelle Andrea, my dad had a blue rose bush in our garden when we were growing up, loved the purple hue they had and maybe that's part of the reason purple roses are my favorite~ Congrats on a top win :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 11:30 PM
Back with well deserved congrats on your top win, Andrea. Excellent choice of form.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 10:15 PM
A very beautiful villanelle Andrea. Congratulations on your first place win! xxoo : )
Gauthier Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Lovely, Andrea.
Waldrop Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 12:02 AM
On my Facebook page the first thing people see is a blue rose. I also see the uniqueness and beauty within a blue rose. Beautiful poem.
James Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations on n great write.
Quigley Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 6:44 PM
Beautifull and skillfully written!
Smith Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Another wonderful effort with deserving honors...
Inman Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Back to admire your beautiful poem Andrea.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 9:41 AM
I'm glad to see this one high on the list.
Misra Avatar
July 1, 2016 at 1:42 AM
A very unique poem, indeed. I agree with John's comment - your last quatrain ssays it all. Congrats on a beautiful poem masterfully composed, and of course, on your wonderful win. ~karam~
Lawless Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 10:05 PM
I got a feeling that this is a little deeper than "the bluest rose". I sense a metaphor that eludes me on first reading....well deserved placement.
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 10:21 PM
thanks, my friend. Very astute of you
Scars Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Austin Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 12:28 PM
A strangely beautiful flower and the poem. Love, daver
Hicks Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 12:05 AM
You possess such an intimate relationship with the rose, it seems ... loved the colors and the tender way you put it all together. I would say, a definite contender.
Walker Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Wish I could give you a 10 for this beauty. And another lovely metaphor.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Masterful, for me the best that I have read so far.
Ball Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 10:34 PM
Lovely Andrea, I love roses and have a long garden devoted just to them. Great job. God Bless, JB
Inman Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 6:48 PM
A beauty Andrea, a wonderful metaphor for a unique woman. I'm a big rose fan and have four small bushes in front of my house. One of them is a purple/blue rose.
Daniel Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 8:50 AM
This is beautiful, Andrea:) Wish I could see a real blue rose some day:)
Hagy Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 6:35 PM
Beautiful write... I love blue flowers!
Mac Donald Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 4:12 PM
Softly sweet Villanelle! "A rose is a rose", but with this it allowed to bloom with unique beauty. Love the image that accompanies this write, good luck with the contest! Hugs, Mikki
Roper Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Amazing, Andrea, very good write good luck in the contest :-) Hugs Eve
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