The Blues

I walked a lonely mile in your shoes the sadness you carry comes in twos if by chance you find one of a kind throw it far from you as I did mine walking a mile in this shoe one is heavier than you knew if by chance you find a shoe throw it far from you as I did mine walking barefoot and blue

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Robert Lindley

Date: 12/15/2016 10:04:00 AM

I LOVE THIS POEM AND THE WAY YOU'VE LAID IT OUT. And my friend, has been many a time I have -walked barefoot an blue.A7 Adding to my fav list and a pleasure to read this morn..

John Beam
Date: 12/15/2016 2:13:00 PM

Thank you, Robert. Keep looking up.

Constance La France

Date: 12/11/2016 6:12:00 PM

John, I just love your poem, the words of course, but the creative layout too, well done ~

John Beam
Date: 12/11/2016 6:28:00 PM

Thanks, B.W. listening to original blues and wine it kinda fell in place and I am glad to meet you.