The Blues

The blues you squeeze into your song.
Without the grays, you don’t belong.
The saxophone tonguing your grief;
Downward, the tears’ a scathing relief.

Turquoise battling the heavy waves.
The flautist, grave, somberly braves
The crashing shore of lighthouse lore.
Sudden widows - the sea keeps score.

The notes of navy grooves and plays
The composite of the ships ablaze.
Without the grays you don’t belong.
The blues you squeeze into your song.

The cobalt reed, a salty taste.
The blues strum strings around your waist.
The drums continuous throbbing;
Aperture of buoys sobbing.

Downward, the tears’ a scathing relief.
The saxophone tonguing your grief.
The blues you squeeze into your song.
Without the grays, you don’t belong.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Legros Kelley Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 8:13 PM
This is an amazing poem, it is a masterpiece, Kim. The blues, wow, you really captured it well in this write.
Hawksley Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 5:16 PM
The language in this poem has a strong musicality, echoing the rhythms and sounds of blues music. The use of words like "tonguing," "grooves," "strum," and "throbbing" creates a strong auditory experience.
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 12:48 PM
- I think I've read this fourteen times, Kim...it brings so many emotions...excellent writing...love it :) - hugs
Read Avatar
January 7, 2025 at 3:28 AM
Hi Kim.,your words describe the blues perfectly. xx
Wolf Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 8:17 PM
'Sudden widows - the sea keeps score' -- That line sticks in my throat, Kim, and it won't come loose. Whoa...
M  Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 12:50 PM
Wonderfully worded Kim....it has a sadness to it. You were in the navy weren't you? Debx
Romios Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 8:16 AM
Excellebt work, pangie xx
DiMino Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 4:51 AM
I love all music...a full range of emotions as needed. Great poem! We must pray for our Nation.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 2:41 AM
The music is sad. So many lost. But we will remember. Love poem, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 6, 2025 at 4:32 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Hind Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 5:06 PM
Gosh, I loved this, dear Kim. It has a haunting quality - with beautiful language.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 5, 2025 at 6:00 PM
Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.
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