The Blue Ocean

Written: August 25, 2026 for Week's Poetry Challenge: The Color Blue ********* the azure ocean sparkling in aquamarine a mermaids playground
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George Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 7:08 AM
I visualise the mermaid swimming and gamboling in the aquamarine stretch of the ocean. Excellent haiku.👍
Borg Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 2:14 PM
I love Haikus, especially this one.
Terry Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 12:03 PM
Mermaids are popular these days. I imagined a happy mermaid frolicking in the ocean.
Hind Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 11:19 PM
lovely
Dietrich Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 11:10 PM
A cute one!
Wolf Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 8:17 PM
Aw, very sweet. ~ Myrrh Man
Buehler Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 2:31 PM
A deep water, aquamarine gem of a poem, Sotto! Blue, beauty in motion! 😄✍️👍
Kendrick Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 2:07 PM
Reads like those mermaids have all the shades of blue in which to enjoy life. Way to go. Congrats. Sara K. 👏✍️
Kauffman Avatar
August 25, 2026 at 12:08 PM
Dear Lasaad, I love the whimsical ocean you have created with sapphire jewels and mermaids. Your three lines immerses me in tales and oceans legends. Best wishes for the challenge! Blessings😄
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