The Blue Hole

I stood above the bottomless hole
A little way from the brim
And saw its waters, menacing, cold
Blue too when sun was dim

Away behind the Orange Grove church
Where rocks give way to swamp
A power silent at me did lurch
My sweating hands very cramp

I struggled to look away from it
The water's blue seduction
The presence of an awesome spirit
Pulling me for destruction

My father warned me I should not go
Let curiosity dry
But stories I heard tugged at me so
Father's wish I did defy

For I am Maroon too like them all
Like Reddicas who dived in
Left in spring and stayed until the fall
Grand uncle forgive my sin

For the lore told of you like sweet tropes
Each myth your legend more swell
Great seer, I bring my heart and its hopes
To learn the place where you dwell

But all I saw was picture of sky
And a blue malignant eye
A silence where no winds ever sigh
And sudden awe - I could die

They said I should hear the sea's deep call
Or the earth's belly yearning
Feel, but all there was my fear to fall
And blue hole without meaning
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ballard Avatar
September 20, 2010 at 7:47 AM
Good poem. Thanks for the comment. Lol. Hope u have luck writing. ~HOPE~
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September 19, 2010 at 6:08 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem....thanks for sharing!
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