Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- The Blue Hole -

                                       Bees fly in drunken joy
                           where cotton candy turns into thoughts
                                     gives us golden moments
                               and guards the soul's jewelry box
                           Listen to the earth's breathing in a conch
                                    in the tears of compassion

                                              Life swings,
                                         from angelic to evil
                                                 Falling ____
                                    down into a huge blue hole,
                             without the slightest glimmer of light
                                           No reconciliation,
                                everything is erased from the soul
                                      One minute before death







                                               17/05/2021
                                      Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                      Blue Hole Poetry Contest
                                 Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco
	                                    Honorable Mention

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Sam Kauffman June 7, 2021 at 1:36 PM This is pretty amazing Anne-Lise. So much to think about in quiet moments when we are aware of nothing around us sinking into profound wisdom. Congratulations on your win!

Alexis Y. May 21, 2021 at 6:45 AM WoW! Anne-Lise, You wrote a well written and profound poem. Your second stanza described your photo well. It looks like a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day- Alexis Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2021 at 12:43 PM - Thank you very much, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Unseeking Seeker May 19, 2021 at 7:53 AM The number 1 ! Anne-Lise Andresen May 19, 2021 at 11:53 AM ... or an N / A :))) - Thank you very much, U.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Christuraj Alex May 19, 2021 at 1:51 AM It's a beautiful poem. Anne-Lise Andresen May 19, 2021 at 2:14 AM - Thank you very much, Alex :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman May 18, 2021 at 11:46 PM Yes the poetry gets deeper as the hole opens up, I like the point you make at the end, Ann-Lise, clever poem this is. Love it. Anne-Lise Andresen May 19, 2021 at 1:29 AM - Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh May 18, 2021 at 10:35 AM Profound. God bless you with a win. Love, Gina Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 12:25 PM -Thank you very much, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury May 18, 2021 at 5:58 AM profound thoughts, Anne-Lise! "earth's breathing in a conch /in the tears of compassion" - love the images. Your interpretation of the theme is unique. Love ~ Mala Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 12:41 PM - Thank you very much, Mala ... glad you liked it ... I really appreciate your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis May 18, 2021 at 4:19 AM The profound and with metaphysical overtones poem, marvelously written, my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 12:39 PM - Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel May 18, 2021 at 2:41 AM Deep and unique, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 12:25 PM -Thank you very much, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose May 17, 2021 at 6:06 PM wow so deep and so insightful, an original by far, Thanks for sharing, and gl in the contest, :) Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 12:38 PM - Thank you very much for your comments and wishes, Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May May 17, 2021 at 4:22 PM I like your perspective on the theme Anne, Vey nicely penned.. Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 12:37 PM - Thank you very much, I really appreciate your comment Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

JC Brul May 17, 2021 at 3:19 PM A great unique interpretation on the theme! Lovely dear Anne-Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 12:36 PM - I really appreciate your comment JCB, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith May 17, 2021 at 2:25 PM A creative story/write and picture. Good luck in the contest. You never know what they are looking for. Have a blessed day writing away............... Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 12:35 PM - It's true: "You never know what they are looking for" ... winning is not the most important thing for me ... fun to participate :) - Thank you very much, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing May 17, 2021 at 1:58 PM I have missed reading your awesome poems, Ann-Lise... Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 12:28 PM - And I've missed you ... hope all is well with you, Akkina :) - Thanks for visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit May 17, 2021 at 1:56 PM Uniquely different interpretation of the them--well done, Anne-Lise. All the best. Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 12:32 PM - Not always an advantage and not following the herd, Vijay :) - But I choose to do it ... because this is me :))) - Thank you very much for your comments and wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sotto Poet May 17, 2021 at 1:28 PM This is dark but unique in terms of sharpness and versatility of expression. I wish you good luck in the contest Anne-Lise // hugs Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 12:27 PM - Many thanks for visits, comments and good wishes Las :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands May 17, 2021 at 1:13 PM Very powerful Anne-Lise. Good luck in the contest :) Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 4:27 AM -Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison May 17, 2021 at 12:59 PM quite a deep dark write my friend and we never know when our life will end, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 4:27 AM - Life can be over in the next moment ... nobody knows -Thank you very much for your comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham May 17, 2021 at 12:47 PM Quite a dark verse Anne and a grisly end. Best of luck in the contest, hope you are well. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2021 at 4:26 AM - From blue to darkness ... and death ... it could not get darker, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar May 17, 2021 at 11:24 AM I would tremble to die without reconciliation. Deep poem. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen May 17, 2021 at 12:22 PM - Death can come suddenly and unexpectedly, Victor -Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

DM Babbit May 17, 2021 at 11:17 AM This is so unique, what an idea. Anne-Lise Andresen May 17, 2021 at 12:20 PM - Thank you very much, DM :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)