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The Blue Beyond

redbirds are soaring
clouds are walking on the skies
turquoise afternoon

diamonds in the sea
reflecting the roaming sun
until the red wall

green birds are singing
in chambers next to the sky
the gold sunshine blues
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 8:59 PM
Wonderful!
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 10:33 PM
I appreciate your comment, Kim. :)
Rolland Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 2:35 PM
so beautiful and refreshing poetry, thanks a lot
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 4:08 PM
Quite welcome. Thank you for the fine compliment. :)
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 12:01 PM
- A beautiful and colorful haiku, Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 4:07 PM
Thank you for your very gracious remarks, Anne-Lise. :)
Meadows Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 12:03 AM
A lovely poem. Well done.
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Thank you very much. Have a wonderful week. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 10:48 PM
Great imagery in your haikus, Well done.
Buehler Avatar
May 1, 2023 at 11:20 AM
Thank you so much. Enjoy your week. :)
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