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The Blue Abode

Blue makes me dream about Love related ideas. For Woman and blue sky- Garments, clouds are obstacles To contemplate beauty and infinity. If it is veiled Things blue makes me blue Blue trains rush by in my body Herons blue fly overhead In my arteries cracks blue paint In my bones titanium floats I keep the blue bird in my heart Though it wants to get out But I am too clever for it I pour the things sweet and soft Thro’ my throat And convey it to stay in there I won’t anyone to see it. Let me sing the beauty of Physical touch with my muse. As my Creator prefers blue sky abode Giving depth and stability Combined with spiritual cleansing.
+++++ Date: 14-11-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Third Place Win Contest: Blue, feeling blue or color blue by P.D and Skat

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Date: 1/22/2014 2:34:00 AM
Congrats on your win, sir....... :)
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Date: 1/21/2014 7:01:00 AM
Congrats on your win friend Ram :) hugs
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Date: 1/19/2014 10:45:00 AM
Nice one on BLUE,dear friend...Wonderful write...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 1/18/2014 6:39:00 PM
wow, Dr. Ram. this is really good writing from you. One of your best poems. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 1/18/2014 6:12:00 PM
Nice and lovely piece....Congrats on your win
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Date: 1/18/2014 2:38:00 PM
congrats on your win Dr Ram
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Date: 11/16/2013 10:57:00 PM
i think blue is such a pretty color, yet it often gets a bad name for being down...a blue mood...feeling blue... love the pretty blue images you painted in your piece...nicely penned poem :)
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Date: 11/16/2013 8:03:00 PM
I love that you keep a bluebird in your heart. Very sweet lines a definite winner in my eyes even ,tho they are green- not blue. He he SuZ
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Date: 11/16/2013 10:55:00 AM
Well tinged with hope, as with the blue you wrote..well done dear Dr Ram, best thoughts and wishes for the contest.. '
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Date: 11/14/2013 6:20:00 PM
Great imagery in this, Dr. Ram! Best wishes in the contest! And thank you for your kind comments on my work. Love, Kim
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