The Blue Abode

Blue makes me dream about Love related ideas. For Woman and blue sky- Garments, clouds are obstacles To contemplate beauty and infinity. If it is veiled Things blue makes me blue Blue trains rush by in my body Herons blue fly overhead In my arteries cracks blue paint In my bones titanium floats I keep the blue bird in my heart Though it wants to get out But I am too clever for it I pour the things sweet and soft Thro’ my throat And convey it to stay in there I won’t anyone to see it. Let me sing the beauty of Physical touch with my muse. As my Creator prefers blue sky abode Giving depth and stability Combined with spiritual cleansing.
+++++ Date: 14-11-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Third Place Win Contest: Blue, feeling blue or color blue by P.D and Skat
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Garg Avatar
January 22, 2014 at 2:34 AM
Congrats on your win, sir....... :)
Liwayway Avatar
January 21, 2014 at 7:01 AM
Congrats on your win friend Ram :) hugs
Arowolo Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 10:45 AM
Nice one on BLUE,dear friend...Wonderful write...Congrats on your win...
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 6:39 PM
wow, Dr. Ram. this is really good writing from you. One of your best poems. Congrats for your win.
Arowolo Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 6:12 PM
Nice and lovely piece....Congrats on your win
May Avatar
January 18, 2014 at 2:38 PM
congrats on your win Dr Ram
Adams Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 10:57 PM
i think blue is such a pretty color, yet it often gets a bad name for being down...a blue mood...feeling blue... love the pretty blue images you painted in your piece...nicely penned poem :)
Delaney Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 8:03 PM
I love that you keep a bluebird in your heart. Very sweet lines a definite winner in my eyes even ,tho they are green- not blue. He he SuZ
Maverick Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 10:55 AM
Well tinged with hope, as with the blue you wrote..well done dear Dr Ram, best thoughts and wishes for the contest.. '
Merryman Avatar
November 14, 2013 at 6:20 PM
Great imagery in this, Dr. Ram! Best wishes in the contest! And thank you for your kind comments on my work. Love, Kim
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