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The Blue

After the darkness envelopes you Nothing feels right, it’s all new The earth around you is crumbling Once on a high, you’re now tumbling What was once smooth, is now cracked The steps were taken, there’s no going back The rain no more a pleasant shower Now, a sound so strong, the dead cower But a little bird’s still flying through the storm Its tiny wings beat softly, alive against the norm Grab hold to this tiny thing Follow it, don’t let it go, cling! For this is your hope, your light It’s your key to a new world, vanquish the night The sun will shine once again, Its where, not when

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 10/18/2016 11:24:00 PM
TEHILLA , Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Tehilla Rosenberg
Date: 10/26/2016 3:00:00 PM
hey do you know anything about ever and wein?
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Tehilla Rosenberg
Date: 10/26/2016 2:58:00 PM
hey!! thank you so much for the warm welcome:)) omg that sounded so nerdy!! would love to be your poetry soup friend!! um so to start about me... i write:) everything actually how about you? luv basketball too
Date: 10/18/2016 10:06:00 PM
Tehilla Rosenberg , Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Tehilla Rosenberg
Date: 10/26/2016 3:00:00 PM
i luv getting comments on my poems- anything you think would make any of them better i would love to hear seriously be harsh:) thanks so much!!! gonna read your poems soon and let you know...your new poetryy soup friend- their
Date: 10/16/2016 5:16:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........
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Tehilla Rosenberg
Date: 10/26/2016 3:02:00 PM
aww thanks:)

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