The Blue

Dubieties engulf all around
 As the brume in the dawn
  Behold plants seeking strength
In this warm cuddling cloud  
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Songs soon sing from the sky
 The common notes that play
  When it’s about to drop wet
 Upon human’s bower.

It’s wonted (by this time) to descry 
 Dark clouds being deserted
By its everyday residents.

In the mood of the inclement
 It’s sparse to hear
  Any row from the firmament
Other than the loyal sound 
  Of the saturated pattering
From the blue yonder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 10:27 PM
a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT
De La Croes Avatar
June 26, 2013 at 12:20 AM
Congratulations, AO. Love what you have done with this poem... David
A   Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 9:49 PM
Abdulhafeez, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
Lamoureux Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 7:04 PM
Great job! Congratulations.
Tacito Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 2:34 PM
The verbiage & flow of this piece was quite touching. I really enjoyed what you did here. Thanks so much for presenting this awesome poem in my contest! :)
May Avatar
June 25, 2013 at 2:20 PM
congrats on your win AO..
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 12:38 AM
a very interesting poem. I love that blue yonder!
Oyewole Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 12:36 PM
Thank you my Lady.
Andresen Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 12:23 PM
- Competent and beautiful, A.O. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Oyewole Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 12:16 AM
Thanks AL
A  Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 11:02 AM
Abdulhafeez, it is sang beautifully :-) a warm feeling, thank you & take care <3 <3 luv* ~ SKAT ~
Oyewole Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 12:15 AM
Yeah, a warm feeling.Take care Skat and thanks.
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