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The Blooms Pristine

In the spring, I'm a Daffodill
In many hues, dancing on the hill
Swaying with  the gentle breeze
In the spring I'm easy to please

In late spring, I'm pale pink rose 
Growing on the trellis, inviting bees toes
To touch on me, drink their fill of nectar
Sweet, in late spring I'm real neat

In early summer, I'm Buddleia
When Butterflies come, Cassiopeiae
Is so jealous of the attention
As they touch and tickle my extensions

Later on I become Great Yellow Gentian
At this time I'm in another dimension
Waiting the time in the fall when I've lived all
Then I become the great Sunflower in the fall

When winter arrives, I'm  barely now alive
This is when Camellia makes her debut
She is really now more alive leaves glisten
They've a glossy waxy shin and the blooms pristine

(In response to Andrea's Blog.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Williams Gault Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 1:26 PM
This poem just blossoms with vivid floral imagery, how lovely! And congratulations on your win in Andrea's favorites contest!
A   Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 7:07 PM
Sara, Congratulations on your win in Andrea's fave contest. XOX - LINDA
Cheema Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 10:02 AM
A 7, Sara! What a lyrical write! Congrats on being Andrea's fave!
De La Croes Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations on your win in Adrea's Fave's contest, Sarah. It is only someone who can appreciate nature's beauty who can identify so closely with flowers!
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:01 PM
A 'blooming' lovely poem Sara :-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Jan, Thanks for stopping by to say congrats..Sara
Scars Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Sara, this is wonderful and you carry a beautiful flow with your pen congrats! :)-luloo
Kendrick Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 12:12 PM
Thanks for dropping by and taking time to comment..It needs brushing up though..Sara
A   Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 5:56 AM
This is beautiful Sara, i really enjoyed the poem,,, and than you for the s.m. yesterday,,,Have a nice and wonderful day,..Sidney LeeAnn
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 9:03 PM
oh, boy, you may have beat me to the punch. ON a contest I was thinking of. hahaha. This is really wonderful, Sara. Hmmm, I'm gonna try to pretend like I did not see this, just in case I do that thing (and into favs too. hahaha)
Clark Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 5:05 PM
I enjoyed the floral arrangement! Thanks... Jeralynn
Culverhouse Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 4:43 PM
come bloom in my garden, it is thirsty looking. How are you?
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