The Blooming Fairy

For my first born, Sofia. She wears the face of a fairy Her eyes, deep with intensity Make you think of prairies Inviting a walk in the country. She travels the skies to search For the secret of the universe Her soul longing to rule her world But struggles to find grandeur. She needs the approval of her peers To feel her worth, for she cannot see The true beauty lurking deep And I pray to find the one who can help her be free. So she can fly like the fairies Her eyes, deep with intensity As she hovers over prairies And makes the flowers bloom pretty. By CarolineCécile Copyright © 06.25.10

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Lisa Cole

Date: 7/9/2010 7:37:00 AM

i love this, so well done, blessings xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/30/2010 6:35:00 AM

Welcome to the "unmarried" club.. look at it as a positive part of your life now.. and your maiden name is beautiful.. there is a reason for everything that happens to us... having a blast with my new cell phone which has internet on it.. a guess an "old" dog like me can learn new tricks..haha.. anyway my "honey" has been great..we are NOT getting married... its impossible anyway but having lots of fun is possible.. so start having yourself some.. this poem is beautiful for your beautiful child

David Byrne

Date: 6/28/2010 5:23:00 PM

So she can fly like the fairies -love it!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/26/2010 11:13:00 AM

What a sweet dedication to your daughter, Caroline. Children have such wonderful imaginative powers. I used to pretend I could fly too. Like the image of Sofia hovering over the prairies and using her magic to make the flowers bloom. Beautiful poem -- a delight to read! Love, Carolyn

Gert W. Knop

Date: 6/26/2010 9:21:00 AM

What a nice poem, Caroline-Cécile! Und vielen Dank fuer die guten Kommentare! All the best and have a great Sunday..Viele Gruesse...Gert