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The Bloom

white jasmine buds bloom
delicate dainty and fresh~
smell sweet heavenly
Date: 11/09/2020 Submitted for: Any New Nature Inspired Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Third Place

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Date: 2/5/2021 2:45:00 PM
well, it's getting hard for me to find a poem I have not read of yours, but I can at least say a belated congrats on your win with this one, sweetie.
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Date: 1/20/2021 1:19:00 PM
Love the heavenly sweet smell! ~ Peace and Tranquility, Gershon
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Date: 11/20/2020 9:48:00 AM
i can almost smell the blossom! many congrats on your win Anitha:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2020 3:48:00 PM
- Congratulations on your wonderful haiku, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/20/2020 3:25:00 AM
Ann thank you dear for the visit and sweet comment. Love and hugs. :)
Date: 11/19/2020 2:54:00 PM
The smell of white jasmine and the warm nights in India! sitting out in moonlight! beautiful haiku and congrats on your win!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/20/2020 3:24:00 AM
Ah yes.. Krishjii... so much reminded of native. Thank you so much. Have a great day. :)
Date: 11/19/2020 1:47:00 PM
Anitha, congratulations on your bronze placement with your sweet haiku!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/20/2020 3:23:00 AM
Thank you so much Tania. The contest was fun and interesting. Have a great day :)
Date: 11/19/2020 9:00:00 AM
Love this. short and sweet well done.
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/20/2020 3:22:00 AM
Thank you Peter for the visit and comment. Have a great day. :)
Date: 11/17/2020 9:29:00 AM
Yes, it is a very pleasant plant to enjoy. Great work. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/17/2020 9:34:00 PM
Thank you so much Sara for the visit and your valuable comment. Have a blessed day. Love and hugs :)
Date: 11/15/2020 4:34:00 PM
so sweetly beautiful!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/17/2020 2:30:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Andrea... Hugs :)
Date: 11/14/2020 5:56:00 PM
Smells really beautiful :)
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/15/2020 1:42:00 AM
Thx dear Akkina... Have a great day... Love and hugs :)
Date: 11/9/2020 7:02:00 PM
Sweet, sweeter -- and sweetest! :) gw
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/10/2020 2:28:00 AM
Thank you for the sweet comment Gershon. Yes, jasmine flower has a sweet strong smell, was reminded of it and thought would include in this Nature Inspired Haiku..Best regards.. :)
Date: 11/9/2020 7:14:00 AM
You always choose perfect words to describe the imagery.. This is lovely..
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/9/2020 7:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for your encouraging words dear Silent. God bless..:)
Date: 11/9/2020 4:54:00 AM
An excellent piece, Anitha!! I smell their fragrance in your words!!
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Anitha Jayasankar
Date: 11/9/2020 5:00:00 AM
Thank you so much Newton Arach... :)

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