Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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The Blood Is Dripping

 
Let me, remove the dagger from my heart-  friend,
The blood is dripping and I am full of sadness;
I must learn to never trust you ever again,
Seems that loyalty is just a thing of madness.

The blood is dripping and I am weeping.

You say one thing but you do another,
Oh, the pain in my heart is shattering;
I am full of tears, I thought we were forever,
Your words just senseless dribble scattering.

The blood is dripping and I am weeping.

My disappointment is so deeply staggering,
And so, I must add more bricks to my high wall;
The Lord up above, makes me forever shining,
And should you try to climb my wall, you will fall.

The blood is dripping and I am weeping.

Let me, remove the dagger from my heart- friend,
But, I must thank you for your cruel deception;
The blood is dripping and I am full of sadness.
See, sorrow always gives my writing direction.

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February 18, 2016

Poetry/Rhyme/The Blood Is Dripping
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Lewis Raynes March 9, 2016 at 4:47 PM "I must add more bricks to my high wall"... i did this once, biggest mistake ever. love ur thoughts, ur words, a strong 7 here Constance La France March 9, 2016 at 10:14 PM Lewis, thanks so much for visiting my poem and the 7 !

Teddy Kimathi February 26, 2016 at 5:16 AM Your poem moves even the hardest souls.... Congrats BW, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-) Constance La France February 26, 2016 at 3:13 PM Teddy, thanks for visiting and the nice comment and the congrats !!

Susan Gentry February 24, 2016 at 9:49 PM Congratulations on your win! Deep, heartfelt pain and emotions expressed. Constance La France February 25, 2016 at 7:14 AM Susan, thanks for the congratulations, and the nice comment, so grateful !

Poet Destroyer A February 22, 2016 at 6:37 PM Anytime...pd

Poet Destroyer A February 22, 2016 at 1:02 PM Congratulations on your win. LINDA Constance La France February 22, 2016 at 6:36 PM Linda, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate !

Beautiful Scars February 22, 2016 at 11:52 AM Broken Wings, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo Constance La France February 22, 2016 at 11:56 AM Laura, thanks for visiting with the congratulations !

Eve Roper February 22, 2016 at 11:35 AM Wow! This beautiful , Broken Wing!!!!!!! Congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve Constance La France February 22, 2016 at 11:57 AM Eve, thanks for visiting for the wow and beautiful, and the congratulations, hugs back ~

Andrea Dietrich February 22, 2016 at 9:08 AM Constance, this one has a lot of emotion in it. Big congrats for your beautiful writing winning in this contest. Constance La France February 22, 2016 at 11:58 AM Andrea, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the congrats !

Hansteven Selfa February 22, 2016 at 7:17 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win! You really are deserving BW! :) Constance La France February 22, 2016 at 11:59 AM Hans, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and the wonderful !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 22, 2016 at 4:05 AM Deep n emotive write Broken.. congrats on much deserved win! Constance La France February 22, 2016 at 11:59 AM Upma, thanks for visiting with the congrats ~

James Inman February 19, 2016 at 3:51 PM Beautiful write BW. Constance La France February 19, 2016 at 5:35 PM James, thanks for visiting and for the beautiful, appreciate ..

White Sage February 19, 2016 at 5:06 AM heart breaking, too deep, i hope this ain't real though, cause the heart seems to bleed more than it could pump...best of luck in the contest Constance La France February 19, 2016 at 9:20 AM Sage, thanks for visiting and the comment, sadly, this is true, betrayal is a horrific pain ~

C T February 18, 2016 at 10:51 PM A 7 Lady Broken Wing 'CT Constance La France February 19, 2016 at 2:37 AM Chase, thanks so much for visiting my poem and the 7, appreciate !

Nathan D. February 18, 2016 at 7:05 PM i think you captured the feelings of betrayal quite well. Constance La France February 19, 2016 at 2:41 AM Nathan, does anything hurt more than being betrayed by someone you trust, thanks for visiting and for understanding ...

Paul Callus February 18, 2016 at 3:50 PM "sorrow always gives my writing direction"...so very true, Constance; in pain and sorrow you find sustenance for beautiful poetry, such as this one. Betrayal and deceit are truly like daggers in the heart! ~ Regards // paul Constance La France February 18, 2016 at 5:03 PM Paul, thanks for visiting my poem, yes, when we are betrayed by a friend we feel such sorrow and pain, at least I do, but I have learned to turn that around and use that emotion to write, this is the gift God gave me, thanks for beautiful ~

Daniel Turner February 18, 2016 at 3:33 PM Betrayal and deceit is great inspiration to write and writing should give us a reflective outlet just as yours has done here. Very well written, BW. With lots of demonstrative emotion and feeling. Great write. Good luck and Peace :) Constance La France February 18, 2016 at 3:38 PM Daniel, thank you for visiting my bleeding poem, your comment is so right, I always try to put my pain and sorrow into my writes, sometimes they end up being my best poems, thank you for the great comment :)