The Blood Is Dripping

 
Let me, remove the dagger from my heart- friend, The blood is dripping and I am full of sadness; I must learn to never trust you ever again, Seems that loyalty is just a thing of madness. The blood is dripping and I am weeping. You say one thing but you do another, Oh, the pain in my heart is shattering; I am full of tears, I thought we were forever, Your words just senseless dribble scattering. The blood is dripping and I am weeping. My disappointment is so deeply staggering, And so, I must add more bricks to my high wall; The Lord up above, makes me forever shining, And should you try to climb my wall, you will fall. The blood is dripping and I am weeping. Let me, remove the dagger from my heart- friend, But, I must thank you for your cruel deception; The blood is dripping and I am full of sadness. See, sorrow always gives my writing direction. _________________________________ February 18, 2016 Poetry/Rhyme/The Blood Is Dripping Copyright Protected, ID 16-759-153-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, The Heart That Bleeds, Sponsor, Malta Forever Fourth Place
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Date: 3/9/2016 4:47:00 PM
"I must add more bricks to my high wall"... i did this once, biggest mistake ever. love ur thoughts, ur words, a strong 7 here
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2016 10:14:00 PM
Lewis, thanks so much for visiting my poem and the 7 !
Date: 2/26/2016 5:16:00 AM
Your poem moves even the hardest souls.... Congrats BW, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/26/2016 3:13:00 PM
Teddy, thanks for visiting and the nice comment and the congrats !!
Date: 2/24/2016 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Deep, heartfelt pain and emotions expressed.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2016 7:14:00 AM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations, and the nice comment, so grateful !
Date: 2/22/2016 6:37:00 PM
Anytime...pd
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2016 6:36:00 PM
Linda, thanks for the congratulations, appreciate !
Date: 2/22/2016 11:52:00 AM
Broken Wings, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2016 11:56:00 AM
Laura, thanks for visiting with the congratulations !
Date: 2/22/2016 11:35:00 AM
Wow! This beautiful , Broken Wing!!!!!!! Congratulations on your win!!!! Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2016 11:57:00 AM
Eve, thanks for visiting for the wow and beautiful, and the congratulations, hugs back ~
Date: 2/22/2016 9:08:00 AM
Constance, this one has a lot of emotion in it. Big congrats for your beautiful writing winning in this contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2016 11:58:00 AM
Andrea, thanks for visiting with the beautiful and the congrats !
Date: 2/22/2016 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win! You really are deserving BW! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2016 11:59:00 AM
Hans, thanks for visiting with the congratulations and the wonderful !
Date: 2/22/2016 4:05:00 AM
Deep n emotive write Broken.. congrats on much deserved win!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/22/2016 11:59:00 AM
Upma, thanks for visiting with the congrats ~
Date: 2/19/2016 3:51:00 PM
Beautiful write BW.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2016 5:35:00 PM
James, thanks for visiting and for the beautiful, appreciate ..
Date: 2/19/2016 5:06:00 AM
heart breaking, too deep, i hope this ain't real though, cause the heart seems to bleed more than it could pump...best of luck in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2016 9:20:00 AM
Sage, thanks for visiting and the comment, sadly, this is true, betrayal is a horrific pain ~
Date: 2/18/2016 10:51:00 PM
A 7 Lady Broken Wing 'CT
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2016 2:37:00 AM
Chase, thanks so much for visiting my poem and the 7, appreciate !
Date: 2/18/2016 7:05:00 PM
i think you captured the feelings of betrayal quite well.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/19/2016 2:41:00 AM
Nathan, does anything hurt more than being betrayed by someone you trust, thanks for visiting and for understanding ...
Date: 2/18/2016 3:50:00 PM
"sorrow always gives my writing direction"...so very true, Constance; in pain and sorrow you find sustenance for beautiful poetry, such as this one. Betrayal and deceit are truly like daggers in the heart! ~ Regards // paul
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Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2016 5:03:00 PM
Paul, thanks for visiting my poem, yes, when we are betrayed by a friend we feel such sorrow and pain, at least I do, but I have learned to turn that around and use that emotion to write, this is the gift God gave me, thanks for beautiful ~
Date: 2/18/2016 3:33:00 PM
Betrayal and deceit is great inspiration to write and writing should give us a reflective outlet just as yours has done here. Very well written, BW. With lots of demonstrative emotion and feeling. Great write. Good luck and Peace :)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/18/2016 3:38:00 PM
Daniel, thank you for visiting my bleeding poem, your comment is so right, I always try to put my pain and sorrow into my writes, sometimes they end up being my best poems, thank you for the great comment :)
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