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The Blood In My Hands

Five points of a star
To mould my own universe
Pierce each bleeding hand



Thabang Jan Ngoma
08-07-2015
Sponsor: Marvin Celestial
Contest Name: Senryu of Being Misjudged

Copyright © Thabang Ngoma | Year Posted 2015

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July 28, 2015 at 7:55 AM

Hi Thabang: wonderful perception. Congrats on your win.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 28, 2015 at 12:46 AM

Yet another lovely win Thabang ! Big congrats!

July 24, 2015 at 11:11 PM

Thabang, CONGRATULATIONS on your win:-)Alexis

July 24, 2015 at 5:01 PM

Thbang, congratulations, awesome senryu. SKAT LOVE

July 24, 2015 at 11:50 AM

Your words a canvas of beauty. Congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve

July 24, 2015 at 8:38 AM

Congrats on your win Thabang:-) hugs Jan xx

July 24, 2015 at 2:17 PM

Hi Jan...good evening to you...thanks forever & always. Enjoy the rest of your weekend..(:heers, Tbang

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