The Blinding Eye of Desire

The Blinding Eye Of Desire




                              We begin at a breakneck speed and a 

                              hectic pace



                              Toward the finish line yearning to win

                              each pivotal race



                              Ambitions could prevail over adversity

                              beneath skies or beyond



                              Yet urging fate to hand the prize is like

                              mining gold from a grain of sand








Penned: 1/6/2022
             5:54 p.m.
             Lake Worth
             Florida USA
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 2/15/2022 7:42:00 PM
Very intelligent thoughts. There is always a grain of gold in your scattered lines, Anselmo !
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Date: 2/15/2022 11:05:00 PM
Thanks very much Valsa!. Have a wonderful Cochin day...ab
Date: 2/12/2022 7:37:00 PM
Interesting comparison there, Anselmo: 'Mining gold from a grain of sand.' Perhaps you've coined a new saying: 'Can't squeeze gold from sand!' ~ Quotes and Quips, Gershon
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Date: 2/13/2022 1:43:00 PM
I like that! Let me see if I can copyright "Can't squeeze gold from sand". Lol. Thanks Gershon...ab
Date: 2/11/2022 6:17:00 PM
Anselmo, you have expressed a very sensible thought. Fate is the one who makes all the decisions.
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Anselmo Boles
Date: 2/11/2022 9:31:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. Sometimes one may feel so sure about what he/she wants and where to end up, but fate is the ultimate judge, regardless. Take care Lasaad!...ab
Date: 2/10/2022 4:18:00 PM
Thank you! Destiny makes the rules, not soothsayers, popes, dictators, queens or kings... Looking forward to your next piece!...ab
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Date: 2/10/2022 11:38:00 AM
Good one, very wise sentiment.
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