the blinding age of enlightenment

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Healing contest
Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann
02/19/25 HMS

When neutron stars collide they unleash immense energy plasma jets, creating conditions extreme enough to produce heavy elements like gold, A single collision can generate gold equivalent to several Earth masses, outshining entire galaxies in the process; An armageddon of brilliance may well one day fill the heavens the blinding age of enlightenment in the end as neutron stars collide ~ I fear a great healing old nick hell shalt get a golden sarcophagus ~ several thousand miles thick said god to satan arc welding his eyes ~ with plasma rich alchemic

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I Am Anaya

Date: 2/19/2025 3:02:00 PM

End game's - a golden coffin -a golden arc seeping the blood of mankind ~a shot in the dark. David, I would treasure your published BIBLE Monoku's! I'll be the first to promote it. Luck in the contest, just beginning mine "Upsidedown World"

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/19/2025 3:24:00 PM

Who knows Anaya, maybe if I’m not struck down in the meantime, but hey the science behind these cosmic phenomena are hardcore insane, yet pretty much irrefutable, thanks for stopping by and the offer lol! I’ll keep my eye out for your entry, cheers David

Di11y Da11y

Date: 2/19/2025 1:31:00 PM

I'm going to risk it, I'll step into the ring with no technical knowledge, risk life and limb and getting a dunces hat (instead of my rock star top hat) Here's what I'm going to say... Ahem "it sounds like a bigger show down than Star Wars" no not that - let's see... Redeeming comment... Old nick is a name for the devil and a nick is an opening... Sounds like it'll all be alright in the end (until grave robbers turn up looting and unleash it all again). *I am not the expert you are looking for*

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/19/2025 3:13:00 PM

That would be (rocket fuel) by any stretch of the imagination, is it legal lol!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/19/2025 3:07:00 PM

(the single beer was artisan and 15%) lol

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/19/2025 3:05:00 PM

"Welcome to the jungle, we got fun and games" (sorry just had a single beer and still carried away with my two chord rock debut) :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/19/2025 2:12:00 PM

Welcome to the mosh pit! All metaphorical of course Dilly but I was drawing analogies between destruction and creation, which is indeed what happens when neutron stars collide reseeding galaxies with new material and (heavy metals) like gold, and the healing process begins once again, so old nick will literally be encased in gold and forgotten until those damn grave robbers (humans perhaps) come along again to release the demon, I brought in God to do a bit of arc welding on his eyes for good measure and the common good, cheers David