Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

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This is a co written piece by Liam Mc Daid and angeline lin In fourteen syllables.to represent the stations of the cross Fourteen lines each step Then fourteen stations the holy trinity Hence in four rows of three the name of the cross Finishing with two when he was taken down as a sign of bowing one's head down in our shame

The Blessing of the Holy Trinity In Easter Light

Condemned king to death by Pirate, scourged and crowned with thorns 
Flesh torn in payment for our sins, Jesus took up His cross
Falling for the first time drained by weight upon his shoulders 

Surrounded by hate,  his mother's presence lighted his face 
Footsteps began faltering Simon helps carry his cross 
Veronica wiped man's cruelty from our Saviour's face 

Falling a second time his strength failed dwindling to the ground 
Kind women weep not for for me but yourself and children's sake 
He fell a third time dragged then prodded to move forward 

Stripped of his garments my merciless executioners 
Nailed unto a cross hands and feet until his cruel end
He commended his soul to the Father's love then breathed his last 

Taken down placed onto our blessed mother's loving arms 
His body wrapped and anointed with spices placed in the tomb

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Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2016 at 5:28 AM - Easter message beautifully written - Wonderful co - write from you 2, Liam and Angeline - (Is it : Angeline Haikutwinkle ???) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2016 at 6:16 AM - Congratulations on today's poem Liam - Your Heavenly Touch - :)

Angeline Haikutwinkle March 27, 2016 at 7:48 PM Love how it all came together and your vision in this. Thanks for this powerful dedication to God.

Dorian Petersen Potter March 27, 2016 at 6:39 PM Hi Liam!This is a very beautiful n' outstanding Easter poem, that you have written here in this collaboration with Angeline, my dearest friend Liam.Very spiritual and inspirational about our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ.I truly enjoy it! Just dazzling!Very beautifully written piece!Just awesome!Excellent imagery! Great collaboration! Just excellent!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + to each!A fav! Thanks for posting it.To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic, gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything,Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your Faith!And keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))I hope that you and your very dear family had a very wonderful Easter Sunday Liam.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Charmaine Chircop March 27, 2016 at 5:02 PM Excellent post both of you, Thanks for putting us in the spirit of our faith. Have a blessed Easter.