The Black Tide - Act 2

As i reach our town
There has been news of the spread
Homesteaders and livestock
In suffocate dead

Nothing has been spared
The outskirts it has reached
Townsfolk now in convoy
Their livelihood's breached

We hear on the radio
This black tide is all around
But it only comes from the rivers
From moist and wetted grounds

We reach the Rangers camp
Where scientists are meeting
To determine this phenomenon
This ebony black string

Many weeks pass
As this menace gathers speed
And its strong smell of oil
Lingers on this weed

A press conference has been called
The lab reports are back
Something deep below
Has made organic compounds attack

Has this been a freak of nature
What else do we not know
What else do we take for granted
That around us steadily grows

Many months have passed
The black tide slowly creeps
This phenomenon from below
Its as if our planet weeps

We have learnt to live in tandem
As we control it best we can
Maybe its always been here
Ever since time began





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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 3:59 AM
Reading your poetry this morning, James, has been a wonderful way to start the day. I found this poem very interesting...the dinosaurs are taking their toll on the living these days, I guess. Decomposed, turned to coal and oil...Hum. You've got me thinking about the eternal plan...cleansing the world with fire...Is it getting ready for the big match? Thank you for sharing your words. And thank you for your most welcome recent comments on my poetry. Have a super Day! Lovingly, Dane Ann
Kendrick Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 6:40 AM
We have red tide around here sometimes but have not heard of black tide...I have often wondered what happens to space where the oil is being pulled from the ground????Does something else go in there like maybe rainwater???Great question raising write..Keep the creative pen flowing..SM..Sara
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March 14, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Wow,.....I read the other comments James, and I believe it's this important of nature that man is depleting from our earth which you have me intrigued with....not saying I'm right, yet in poetic thoughts, this one, well both acts has impowered my thoughts Sir ! Awesome write Mr. Fraser ! james
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March 14, 2010 at 3:02 PM
Kind of scary senario. I agree with Carolyn--"compelling" is an apt description of this poem. Good use of rhyme to share your thoughts. I left a comment on the awesome poem you wrote with Carolyn. Keep on writing!! Have a good week. Karen
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March 14, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Compelling conclusion, James. Can't help but think "oil" is the black tide. We are always warned of the dangers of offshore drilling; could this be the consequence? Quite a way for Mother Nature to rebel! So glad you finished this one. You should be co-writing with Stephen King. Love, Carolyn
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