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The Black Tear

Black tinged tear dribble down in misery,
now heart broken 
forever:
bereft
life.
Will 
he turn
back for her?
Maybe relent?
Forlorn she sat on the sofa waiting.


3 November 2020
Picture 2

Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2020

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Sara Kendrick Date: 2/25/2021 5:42:00 AM Sad. I kind of doubt his return or it he does he stay put. Thanks for all the visits. Sara Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 11/13/2020 11:29:00 AM Marvelous Tetractys, Victor. You paint such beautiful pictures w/words. Love and peace always. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 11/8/2020 9:54:00 PM Hi Victor, You painted a sad poignant picture in your well written write. Good job!Best wishes in the contest -Alexis Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/6/2020 7:01:00 PM hey we did different pictures but we had something or someone sitting and waiting on a sofa! I really like this. Let me see the other version. Login to Reply

Angela Crabtree Date: 11/4/2020 4:34:00 PM The beginning of the story well written, Victor. I enjoyed both part 1 and 2 :) Login to Reply

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 11/4/2020 1:23:00 AM I should have read this one first! A meticulous poetic display of pain that reigns in the heart and rains from the soul reaching for a healing hand.. so beautiful what your poetry has narrated, Victor! A great delight to read! My warmest wishes. Regards and blessings. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 11/4/2020 1:07:00 AM Sad tetractys so well penned, Victor:) Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 11/3/2020 7:32:00 PM Yours is a wonderful tetractys, Victor, but so sad. The scene is well depicted. Best wishes for the contest. :=) Login to Reply

Angela Crabtree Date: 11/3/2020 6:01:00 PM Very emotional words, Victor. I enjoyed this a lot. Good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/3/2020 2:13:00 PM a real weepy in many ways Victor, i like the black tinged tears theme, good luck in the contest-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 11/3/2020 10:23:00 AM May you only shed tears of joy from this day forth dear poet friend, winning wishes sent on the wings of a dove. Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 11/3/2020 9:23:00 AM Much emotion you delivered in just a few words, Victor. Excellent depiction of how she feels. I predict this is a TOP winner. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/3/2020 8:05:00 AM - A touching picture, Victor - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 11/3/2020 7:59:00 AM You captured the scene well Victor, her heart torn in two not knowing Good luck in the contest Tom Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/3/2020 7:59:00 AM Mascara tears, heart-wrenching. Login to Reply

Quoth Theraven Date: 11/3/2020 6:41:00 AM Victor, Very nice depth to this well in poem. -Richard Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 11/3/2020 6:31:00 AM Black tear is a powerful expression which highlights the sadness of this poem.. A sorrowful tetractys... Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 11/3/2020 6:01:00 AM Much said in few words. Nice one Victor! Best wishes in the contest :) Linda Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 11/3/2020 5:50:00 AM I smell a winner. Warm hugs and good luck in the contest vb! xomo Login to Reply