The Black Dream

my head is speeding and full of bad thoughts
i cant concentrate i can only tell myself to not succeed in suicide
its to late its already started
all i hear is the moaning and groaning of people dyeing
im in over my head with all the stress
i only see black with a mirror of flames ahead
i cant put the pieces of my life together
im scared of my own mind and dont want to enter the danger zone
i cant escape the darkness no matter how hard i try
im still alive but fill like im dyeing a slow and painful death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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April 5, 2016 at 9:04 PM
lytishia bradley, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem.---LINDA
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August 21, 2015 at 2:47 AM
LYTISHIA, I like this very much **SKAT**
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