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The Black Bird

Sitting on My front porch There was a black bird eating blackberries and toast

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Sean L Sanders

Date: 8/27/2013 2:10:00 PM

I can't believe you were so young when you wrote these, well I can tell you you were and are very talented poet

Caleah Buil
Date: 9/1/2013 2:07:00 PM

Aw, thank you! I'm trying to get there. ;)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/8/2013 11:52:00 PM

Your talent has showed from an early age. All the poems I have posted have been written since October 2012. Here I am at 52 finally developing the skills to express myself through writing. I guess I am a slow starter.

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/12/2013 8:54:00 AM

Aww thank you! Better than never! And who knows? Maybe back then you DID have the talent, it just took you now to find it. :D Everyone on here is so extremely talented. :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/4/2013 11:35:00 AM

I like to see you posting more, Caleah! A nice image in this one... it has the feel of haiku for me. An objective un-opinionated standpoint of the writer... there is beauty in simple observations of life.

Caleah Buil
Date: 6/4/2013 1:11:00 PM

Haha I was just having a field day when I found my old poetry! I'm like, "Post, post" These were basically written when I was 10-11 years old. So nice to know I was a bit talented back then. ;)Thanks so much it really is quite beautiful.