The Birthday's Mixed Blessing

The discounts are now quite a few
And cause for a feeling that's blue
It's true--what a drag
As the parts start to sag
A bonus for age sixty-two
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Breidenthal Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 12:40 AM
Another clever one. I enjoy reading your short, humorous limericks. Cant wait to read some more ~! Always, Laura
Squyres Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 12:11 AM
The discount collected was due, when I'd had a drink of fresh brew, leaving the pub, I tripped on a rug, Now sporting some new black and blue. lol I know pub and rug only sound alike ... Enjoyed your limerick
Dietrich Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 10:02 PM
One place I know gives them at 55, so I got my first one over there but never have even used it yet. Because nowadays we don't have the money to even eat out. And sad part is, we are not even on SS yet. UGGGG
Kendrick Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 7:06 PM
Ahhh!!Got a chuckle..Life is nifty after fifty though..Enjoyed reading this one this eve..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
Duncan Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Happy Birthday Duke,,,,, and Happy Valentines Day as well ;} I was a bit worried about Bibles Stories,, and people being offended,,, I was raised catholic . Thank you for reading my words Duke ;}
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November 13, 2016 at 10:44 AM
You never have to worry about anything here!
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February 14, 2013 at 11:18 AM
Happy birthday!! - I've stopped counting the years, I am forever 25 +. - Happy Valentine's day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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