The Birthdays

The Birthdays

You came into the world in the  afternoon
A tiny bundle with red tuff of fine hair
Ready to leave your safe and warm cocoon
Not fussy, life entered with little flare

We prayed for you and God provided great Joy 
A slim long bundle of happiness, God's blessing 
We were full of love and gratefulness, my boy 
Wonderful companion so much love overflowing

From you came this little boy who added much
Adorned  with such wonderful physical traits
Downy skin, strong finger grips, powerful touch 
Born with minutes to spare ALMOST late for the date. 

Two generations remembered by the third
Clear as a crystal nothing at all blurred

Collaborative poem written by Sara Kendrick
And  Doris Culverhouse
First Stanza: Sara
Second Stanza: Doris
Third Stanza first two lines: Sara
Third Stanza last two lines: Doris
Summary couplet: Sara
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
November 27, 2014 at 11:40 AM
A marvelous collaboration. A joy to read on this blessed day. God's blessings to you and yours my friend.. super 7..... Bravo, to both poets....
Andresen Avatar
November 23, 2014 at 6:11 AM
- You and your daughter should write more collab - A beautiful write from both of you - Send my regards to Doris .... miss her writing - Have a nice Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Goswami Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 12:32 PM
Your ending is super...I enjoyed your unique poem...Last two lines touched my consciousness...Best wishes from India...
A. Sharma Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 3:07 AM
Very lovely write Sara ! Glad having met ur daughter thru' this wonderful write! Awesome work!
Dietrich Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 8:53 PM
how wonderful. and super cool that you did it with your daughter. I just don't see her much here. is she really busy?
Meade Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 8:37 PM
Two is better than one, you all did great -- the miracle of birth shared by family is a special time to celebrate. All the best.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 7:20 PM
Nice done Sara and Doris.
Allison Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 5:35 PM
lovley imagery on this charming collaboration - well penned Sara and Doris:-) Hugs jan xx
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