The Birth of an Unholy One

In a pristine white room
Stands a smiling youth—
His eyes as clear as an ancient well,
His hair as smooth as a spider’s web,
And his flesh soft as granite. 

What majestic being! 
This... 
An unholy vessel, 
Whose praises should we sing? 

A piece of art—
Capable of completing itself,
Growing and unfolding beyond the maker’s hands, 
Then shattering, 
Returning to its most primordial state. 

As if the world had been flipped,
Then a mirror was placed
Facing the ground. 

A disturbing presence
Proclaimed a child.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 23, 2026 at 9:16 PM
A strikingly gothic meditation on birth, creation, and the unsettling contradictions within beauty. The pristine setting and idealised youth gradually give way to harsher, uncanny imagery, creating an effective descent from admiration into dread. The mirror image facing the ground is especially memorable, deepening the poem’s sense of a world turned disturbingly askew.
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August 25, 2026 at 9:18 PM
I truly appreciate your careful reading, Alison. You have quite successfully identified the shift from beauty to fear. However, this poem also has a more intimate undertone: ‘The Unholy’ is a mythologised self-image. The author is consumed by self-loathing. The narrator’s rejection of this figure as ‘the unholy one’ is deliberately contrasted with descriptions that appear beautiful, so that this poem is not merely about the birth of a monster but rather about the birth of someone who begins to believe that their very existence is fundamentally flawed. Rather than merely depicting an inverted environment, the mirror facing the ground also carries personal connotations. It reflects a distorted form of self-perception. So, I really like your interpretation of these Gothic and uncanny elements, because essentially they are merely the surface of a far more personal conflict lying beneath.
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