Annabelle Jane Poet Quatrain

The Birds Begin

Despite the black, the birds begin
To call the light unto the day,
Persistent songs remind the Sun
To send the stars upon their way.

There's hope in this which I admire:
The birds trust what they're yet to see,
I know I trust you just the same,
And always will, unfailingly.

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Keith Bickerstaffe May 28, 2012 at 12:26 PM Ahhh! the wisdom of the birds... the behaviour of creatures rises above the duplicity of man, and helps us understand the nature of trust. A beautiful piece with a perfect rolling cadence and subtle rhyming. :)

Sara Kendrick April 29, 2012 at 2:22 PM Enjoyed reading your work..It speaks of your faith..Sara

Laila Andresen Mjelde April 28, 2012 at 1:49 PM Sorry about the wrong name on my comment, was reading Sara's poem before yours, but I ment every word I wrote and it was for your poem.. Sorry once more! oxoxo always Laila

Laila Andresen Mjelde April 28, 2012 at 1:46 PM Beautiful written, Sara! excellent work, enjoy reading your poetry! There is always hope for the hopeful! oxoxo always Laila

Leo Larry Amadore April 28, 2012 at 1:43 PM Very nice rhythm, alliteration, and rhyme...and a pleasing, positive message. Good work!

Keith Bickerstaffe April 28, 2012 at 12:15 PM Beautiful cadence and rhyming. A lovely poem of trust and resignation. Well done, Annie! Best wishes, Keith

John Rhinem April 28, 2012 at 11:22 AM Smile ˜ Now, this is some beautiful Poetry I would surely say, my dear sweeet beautiful Annie ˜ "And, HIS BEAUTY, smiled at everyone and said, 'I have not found such great faith....'" * Beautiful ˜ My love, Always, John!:) ˜