Don Johnson Poet Limerick

The Birds and the Bees

	
Royal Trevino
Contest Name	
Birds and the bees

Good ole Clive he said to me,   
Bee’s aint buzzing decently,
Mobile phones got  their number,
Buzz  like a bent cucumber,
broody bird said recently.

Don Johnson

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Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2012 at 9:51 PM Fun one, and I enjoyed seeing what you wrote beneath here to Anne Lise to explain it more. That was interesting, buzz like a bent cucumber!!

Don Johnson February 17, 2012 at 5:25 PM Anne lise, bees buzz at a cycle frequency.(so many times a second) mobile phones buzz with a very fast speed too...will does one effect the other?

Anne-Lise Andresen February 17, 2012 at 4:37 PM Funny Don....where do the idea comes from?"Mobile phones got their number" -Good luck in contest!- oxox love Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey February 16, 2012 at 11:53 AM ha ha, this is a wonderful write that I read this afternoon! What a lovely poem with the line, "...Buzz like a bent cucumber,..." such a grandiose line that one is! Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud February 16, 2012 at 9:55 AM busy lines that whip up a great verse, don!... very creative!..winning wihes and huggs..:)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 16, 2012 at 8:17 AM Nice one Don all the best in the contest xx