Home » Poems » Don Johnson » The Birds and the Bees

The Birds and the Bees

Royal Trevino Contest Name Birds and the bees Good ole Clive he said to me, Bee’s aint buzzing decently, Mobile phones got their number, Buzz like a bent cucumber, broody bird said recently. Don Johnson

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2012 9:51:00 PM

Fun one, and I enjoyed seeing what you wrote beneath here to Anne Lise to explain it more. That was interesting, buzz like a bent cucumber!!

Don Johnson

Date: 2/17/2012 5:25:00 PM

Anne lise, bees buzz at a cycle frequency.(so many times a second) mobile phones buzz with a very fast speed too...will does one effect the other?

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/17/2012 4:37:00 PM

Funny Don....where do the idea comes from?"Mobile phones got their number" -Good luck in contest!- oxox love Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/16/2012 11:53:00 AM

ha ha, this is a wonderful write that I read this afternoon! What a lovely poem with the line, "...Buzz like a bent cucumber,..." such a grandiose line that one is! Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/16/2012 9:55:00 AM

busy lines that whip up a great verse, don!... very creative!..winning wihes and huggs..:)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/16/2012 8:17:00 AM

Nice one Don all the best in the contest xx