The Birdfeeder

Did it take getting old 
  to appreciate the crows?
I plant my feet on the floor.
Thoughts always the same
Toilet, coffee, feed the birds
  who have come early 
as winter sits around the corner.

Do they fall asleep thinking of me?
Are they watching the door?
I wonder as when I step out
  the crows begin to caw.
A regular “breakfast is served”
  song to the neighbourhood.
 And they come.

The woodpecker angling
  the seed ball.
I question why he’s not banging
  on the tree.
But we all need a break from knocking our heads.
Even birds I suppose.

The pigeon pair arrives
  cursed by my neighbour.
But mine are not dirty, abhorrent things.
These creatures are shiny, silvery, beautifully shaped.
As all things are when taken care of.

So many are now here it becomes
    bird ballet or sometimes
I think of air traffic control.
How do they not collide at warp speed?

And then - the dog appears.
Mass migration takes flight
   except for one lone blue tit.
No fear here.
Fixated.
Gulping down as much as he can.
I admire him.
I love risk takers even when there is no risk.

The birds feed for hours.
If not careful, my morning slips until
  the feeder goes quiet.
The birds with full bellies.
My mind full of peace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2025 at 11:51 AM
I see you really relate to the outdoors. It makes me wonder if you live near a woods. Or water. Or both! Very nice poem
Barberis Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 6:29 AM
I love nature. And I'm very lucky to live in a town surrounded by woods with a garden full of birds. I also spend time each year in Cornwall UK at the sea! I didn't realise my surroundings permeate my poems but they seem to! I write about what gives me joy (contest topic permitting). :)
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