The Bird In the Sky

A beautiful bird was soaring up high
and as I watched it adrift in the open sky
that good for nothing bird took a crap in my eye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mister Roboto Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 9:59 PM
this reminds me of the FIRST POEM I EVER WROTE...no kiddin! Insane. Weird!
Pettit Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 8:20 PM
That good for nothing flying clown. If I had a gun, I would shoot it down. However, there's no hunting allowed in this town. Your word is delightfully descriptive with decent rhyming.
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