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The Big Reveal

WoW! I am finally here, and I can't believe my eyes, Everything is so dark and creepy, I am really scared. I see ghost and goblins and scary looking monsters every where. I thought to myself “everything looks so real” Did they hire actors or what?” They went all out for this “Halloween Extravaganza” The music is even spooky. My heart is about to jump out my chest. The maze(dark and creepy) was so long and I thought it would never end. Monsters jumped out of no where each second of the maze. I started to think this maze is going to be the death of me, Where is the paramedics when you need them? This Extravaganza lasted 3 hours long. Who knew they could pull something off like this? Next it was the big reveal………………. Underneath the costumes were all of my friends at Poetrysoup! Alexis Y. 10-28-18

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Date: 10/29/2018 10:39:00 AM
Hi Alexis, loved the content of this one. You crafted it so well, your words leading this reader with such skill to such a wonderful ending. Loved the write. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 10/29/2018 9:24:00 AM
Ha ha, cute!
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Date: 10/29/2018 8:42:00 AM
Boo!
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Date: 10/28/2018 4:47:00 PM
When I read the last line, I giggle clapped, if that makes sense. I've missed you, don't know why roads cross when they do, but always enjoy arriving here, Alexis. This is delightful, loaded with a warm and playful personality. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 10/28/2018 2:30:00 PM
I have to ask, do we look better with or without masks lol
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Date: 10/28/2018 2:45:00 PM
Lol! Use your imagination:-)Alexis

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