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The Big Mistake

She wonders where her journey ends Pondering faces everywhere She looks for love in lonely places Wondering if her pain will cease Smoldering in her desperate heart She felt she had her one true love Lingering in those after thoughts Like a fleeting mist he’s gone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/23/2009 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful, poignant write here Barbara. Welcome to PoetrySoup ... I look forward to reading lots more of your writing !
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Date: 5/31/2009 10:01:00 AM
True love is very scare, in fact true love is as essential as the air but as rare as diamond. I am yet to find true love in any human being except…This piece is awesome. I love the flow of words and the way you pass the message. i will add thgis to my favourite list. I will send you a soupmail
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