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The Big Hockey Game

I'm in the locker room, our team is ready to zoom Equipment is on, for there is a game to be won The music is playing, nervous, my body is shaking The game, just moments away, it's the highlight of my day Butterflies in my belly, I hope our team is ready Coaches go over our strategies, of course, we don't want any penalties Last second thoughts race through my head, I'll make it a game that I won't dread Coach says it's time to play, I want a win for my red and gray Now is my time, I got to go, see you after the game, when I'm covered in snow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/7/2010 5:07:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sebastian. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/5/2010 2:09:00 AM
I like your poem. I remember when I used to go for taekwondo fights I had the jitters too
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Date: 9/4/2010 4:38:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup[.. so enjoyed reading your very creative sports write tonight.. soup offers many contests...check them out and enter.. and good luck..with luv..
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Date: 9/4/2010 11:31:00 AM
loved the excitement
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