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The Big Bang Laid Bare

programmed my 3d printer to build a cosmos ~ then all hell broke loose 


by David Kavanagh

allusionhow i feeluniversemonoku

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Jennifer Proxenos

May 12, 2022 at 12:28 PM

This is so clever, your wit is unsurpassed in this Monoku! I enjoyed Harry's comment, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.

David Kavanagh

May 13, 2022 at 1:16 AM

I was guessing Jennifer the only way I’ll ever build a cosmos will be in a 3d printer, but no doubt it will explode in a Big Bang, the idea perhaps brings a little food for thought, cheers David

Anne E Sangster - K

May 10, 2022 at 10:00 AM

Tee-hee :-D Good one David! Cheers Anne :-)

David Kavanagh

May 10, 2022 at 10:19 AM

Thank you Anne, it’s a long shot but who knows, early stages yet, cheers David

Harry Horsman

May 10, 2022 at 2:28 AM

Makes a change from the human race, David. Or maybe your printer was telling the truth, the way we are??? So much to think about here. Great poetry...Harry

David Kavanagh

May 10, 2022 at 3:27 AM

Thanks Harry, I was hoping readers would see different scenarios, and get them thinking outside the box, your comment just reinforced my intentions, cheers David