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The Big Bad Wolf

Time is going by Hell is breaking loose Everybody is running, running, jumping, paralleling by Bright eyes surround you, they have never, always, sometimes, been waiting If the stars blink out, the sun burns out, the moon falls down Great savta's all around, will have never been creating Bright, bright, bright, living it up All the blessings and curses of the universes Dished out in one golden cup Wish, wish, faith, hope, pray upon a star Often someone will hear Like an Angel, They always know where you are Fall away, and pray that you can hold all you hold dear

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/9/2012 4:12:00 PM
Stellar! I loved the way of rhyming in the first three stanzas (1st line with 3rd) then you decided to rhyme the fourth stanza in a differentway. It's not just an acrostic piece. Great job. Love, Khalid.
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Date: 9/9/2012 5:18:00 AM
Love this! You've done your Acrostic very well!
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