Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

The Best Vacation

By train, we went
Then bus’ ascent
In winter cool
To God’s footstool*
A hill station
Such elation!

The clouds descend
That heady blend
Of earth and sky
I sure feel high!
Foggy mornings
Chilly warnings

Draped in warm clothes
Joyful repose
Zigzagging way
Where flowers play
I loved that place
Natural grace

Wedding of friend
We did attend
Linking of souls
On mountain rolls
Sweet sensation
Best vacation!



02.03.2022


*Isaiah 66:1a - "Thus saith the Lord, The heaven is my throne, and the earth is my footstool..."

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Virginia Gelok February 3, 2022 at 8:54 AM Were you at our nephew's wedding on a mountaintop in B.C.? This poem of yours allowed me to feel like I was there. Thanks, it is beautiful.

Tom Cunningham February 3, 2022 at 6:34 AM Sounds like you had a wonderful time Jo and celebrating the wedding of your friend too. Good luck in the contest. Tom