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The Best Poem Ever

~The best poem ever~ Without saying a word I’m going to go where no one has gone before. A twilight zone, only God and I know of. Without saying a word I’m going to recite the best poems ever. Poems with no vision too stare. Quietly with a hum, only you can hear. Silent through my mind I will walk whistling, without a care. Feeling and thinking as my heart beat goes on. Searching for your heart beat next to mine. Dreaming of words that blind, Dreaming of words which connect us together! Without saying a word I’m going to look and speak for the first time. Howl and feel as our chemicals sublime. I’m going to get hungry before I die in your arms. Through circles and rods, I carry this year alone. Imagining all the days it was only you and I. “Not only I!” Without saying a word I’m going to listen for your voice to call my name. A whisper that setting itself on repeat. Anticipating, those look before you look away. Wanting and waiting, I will still be whistling. Overwhelmed by, fate at the door. Without saying a word I’m going to, leave a whisper in the bedroom Without making movement, with my mouth! Control all the space, around me. Touching the energy you left behind. Hear the snowy winter chime. Experience all the shelter in your hold. Without saying a word I’m going to, lay down beside you. Laying in a way, that feels better than freedom. Millions of miles away, I’ll still be whistling. And waiting and waiting, for that perfect lay. Arguing and embracing the air we both breathe. A breath for every reason! Without saying a word I’m going to, mime the world tonight. Over and over, till I mime the perfect poem, like the olden days. Without a word to say! I’m wrapping my own arms around me, like a mime. Explaining the breath you took without me. Talking to myself without saying a word! Writing the perfect poem without a word to say! Without saying a word I’m going to, yell this inside. Whistle and mumble till I’m out of breath. Dying with my dreams to be by your side! Without saying a word I’m going to, close my eyes and see your face. A bond not even death can break. Without saying a word I’m going to, sit here, till your wind hits. A tap that’s inspires the best poem ever. Until then, I’m going to whistle without a word to say. And enjoy your silhouette everyday. by;pd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/8/2016 10:16:00 AM
A very, very evocative poem, Linda. Kudos! It is cerebral and visceral at the same time. This poem has an ethereal flow that feels so otherworldly. A futuristic, space age love poem. There I go, effusing again. Sorry, PD. In short, this is a top notch, seven salute piece of poetic artistry. Love your work as always. Much love and respect to you.
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Date: 4/25/2016 6:32:00 PM
I can't even describe how good it is. Just wow.
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Date: 2/6/2016 12:37:00 PM
Indeed, the best poem ever! :) Loved it.
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:18:00 PM
Yes I will comb the lashes that surrounds the eyebrow of the world's eyes until I can scale the roughest edges and touch destiny.... Indeed Your poem is fantastic!
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Date: 9/9/2014 6:24:00 PM
yes I will add this to my favs. boy i wish that someone like you would add my musketeers poem to their fav.
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Date: 2/3/2014 6:32:00 PM
So beautiful my friend :-)
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Date: 6/28/2013 9:14:00 PM
beautiful :) 7
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Date: 6/5/2013 10:45:00 AM
this is one of the bestest poems i've heard till date.. really cool n inspiring... love it.. love d way u put ur emotions into words.. :)
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Date: 5/30/2013 11:34:00 AM
I revisit this masterpiece via my fave list... It's still glow. What a heartfelt write Mistress! How are you doing? AO
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Date: 5/23/2013 2:20:00 PM
Masterfully woven piece by Linda. Grandly inspiring dear one. I enjoy reading it. You really made my day. God bless you.
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Date: 5/9/2013 1:50:00 PM
Thanks for completing my day with this your heartfelt poem. I love the repetition part of it: "without saying a word..." as it equally add to the beauty of the pen. I think I miss no line. They 're all best quilled and worthy. A Fave! Goodnight Mistress~A.O
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Date: 3/19/2013 8:26:00 PM
This was so cool Linda! I thought it was clever how you explained with very intimate WORDS about how you weren't going to say a single thing. It's the kinda poetry that happens without our brains coming up with it... keeping to the pace of time as it happens... it writes itself because you aren't the sole creator... but instead the one who simply lets the birds fly free... nothing forced. Going straight to my faves!
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Date: 2/5/2013 5:37:00 PM
I really want a girlfriend as I read this. It is quite intimate and romantic.
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Date: 1/31/2013 5:35:00 AM
I forgot that I had done this before, but without saying a word, I want you to know that you are Loved and that I wish the best for you. Lucy
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Date: 1/28/2013 5:26:00 AM
A poem about writing a poem, that describes the reason why the poem was written, but it's only in experience and without words. The question is; Is it without words because it's without the other character and no longer has that experience, or is it without words, because no words can describe that strong bond? If you answer the last there almost lies a contradiction within, but we won't focus on that, because almost any idea can be turned upon it's head in this same way. Nice poem Linda.
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Date: 11/25/2012 10:50:00 PM
Without saying a word, nah, i gotta say something about how very emotional this piece is, it draws you right in and holds you, just beautiful, Linda
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Date: 10/16/2012 5:17:00 PM
PD. This is a beautiful poem. Without saying a word. The best poem ever. That is what you have written here. Many blessings. Lucy Check your SoupMail later
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Date: 10/9/2012 11:11:00 PM
Wow! What a write! Very nice... :o)
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Date: 9/14/2012 7:59:00 AM
Oh PD...you whistle so sweetly, love this poem! Hugs
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Date: 9/4/2012 8:23:00 PM
It goes into my favorite poem. Ravindra
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Date: 9/4/2012 8:21:00 PM
You have really created a Gem my friend. A poem which takes us into a different world of dreams and emotions, beauty and love. Distance appears to vanish and words take shapes in forms, which began to fill even the reader with new colors and shades of life, love and imagination. Great and excellent write PD. Hats off for creating such a beautiful painting of Poetry and thank you for your kind and precious words on my Poem. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra ...Poet D
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Date: 8/22/2012 8:58:00 AM
This is the BEST POEM and YOU are the BEST POET EVER!!!!!! Congratulations my dear friend, PD!!!! More power and blessings to you always!! hugs, leonora
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Date: 8/16/2012 4:19:00 PM
And when the dreams begin to flow. That's when God's magic begins to show. Mid morning gifts of mistic muse. A line or two for us to choose. And hopefully we'll write em' down. So maybe, someday, I can get out of this town.
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Date: 8/16/2012 9:34:00 AM
Whoa!!! an excellent poem...its really the best poem ever :) Congratulations my friend. **Mary**
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Date: 8/8/2012 9:58:00 PM
An excellent poem here PD!!!I am faving this GEM!BTW it is 9:30 AM of 9th August here:)
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