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The Best One

The greastest gift I received this year Was just the fact that you weren't there The kids were happy and not afraid You are finally fading away There was peace and laughter in our hearts And you were not there to tear it apart Its to bad that you cant see them smile and free But, thats the best present anyone could give me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/9/2012 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Lay's contest Crystal. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2012 1:33:00 PM
Powerful penned winning entry! Great job! Pleased of this poem's success..I could have a similar story!! Gwendolen
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Date: 3/8/2012 9:12:00 AM
An empowering write Crystal, full of images of strength and triumph. Thank you for sharing and congrats on your win. Lay
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