The Best Laugh

the best laugh that made you cry
as you digressed and doubled
over and bent to your knees
whilst slapping the floor

10/8/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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October 10, 2018 at 8:04 AM
That is the kind of laughter we all need to experience every once in a while. Good one Kim.
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October 10, 2018 at 4:54 PM
Thank you, Chris! :):)
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October 10, 2018 at 5:09 AM
Nice. laughing brings some burst tears and makes the jaw painful
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October 10, 2018 at 5:50 AM
For sure :):)
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October 10, 2018 at 1:15 AM
I miss these kinds of laughs. I want one today, Kim. Thanks for reminding me.
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October 10, 2018 at 5:49 AM
Hope you get blessed with one :):)
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October 9, 2018 at 10:46 PM
Can imagine it very well, Kim, nice description:)
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October 10, 2018 at 5:49 AM
Thank you :):)
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