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The Best I Ever Had

THE BEST I EVER HAD The smile that brightens my days The hands that wipe off my tears Brown eyes that create happiness Dimples that hide the pain inside. The heart that loves deep inside, You the friend always on my side, The love that lives in my mind. only saying your name creates a smile, That does not fade in our minds, Always here though there are miles Keeping us apart and in each other’s minds. You the best I ever had, The one I will never hurt, But tease just to remind her of pain, That brought us together in the same grain Flushed all of it remained fully sane, Cared of each other, And faced the world together. To see her smile makes all better, Which is why I would never hurt her. /THE LOVING OW-JAY Odwa Mdeyide/

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/16/2015 12:18:00 AM
ODWA, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:15:00 PM
Odwa:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 11/2/2014 6:49:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Odwa- I choose your first lovely and very well written poem - I like it a lot !! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/28/2014 10:51:00 AM
Lovely...I enjoyed the innocent love...Best wishes from India...
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