The Best Fly Catcher

Though a doctor or a lawyer in my parents' eyes, 
I eschewed that to become the best at catching flies. 
I could have been a doctor (if I had been wise).
From their graves, I can still hear their tortured cries,
"When will little Davey finally realize
there's more to life than being best at catching flies?"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Wolf Avatar
August 26, 2025 at 4:04 PM
Sonds like you disappointed your parents just like I did, when I refused to sit for the law boards. That was pretty much it for my relationship with my father, the lawyer. Oh, well... A long, long time ago...
Crandall Avatar
August 26, 2025 at 6:20 PM
Really - wow, interesting. My dad wasn't too successful in the traditional sense of the word, but he was a nice guy, and I don't think I disappointed him. I'm not sure where my hangup about underachieving comes from.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 5:35 PM
witty and hilarious. "Fly Catcher's Lives Matter"..... :-)
Crandall Avatar
August 26, 2025 at 6:20 PM
Thanks, Sara!
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