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The Best Day of My Life

Waiting in this big,dark place, I just can't wait to see your face, As time goes by this place gets smaller, As i am getting taller, I hear you talking, and feel you walking, making me want to get stronger, So I can be like you, & run & walk & talk. This place is so tiny theres no more room, I see a light and a man all dressed in white, Going toward it, feeled with fright, making sure I'm ready to put up a fight, I'm out, I'm free, Oh my it's bright, all these lights and people in white, I'm scared & cold, I just want to be held, Not by the man in white or the girl with a smile, I want to be held by you, my mommy, Where I feel safe in this place, By your side, Ready for this crazy ride.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/1/2010 11:14:00 AM
this is a sweet write. and good rhyme.it flows together. keep writing. -Always&Forever Lynette
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