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The Best Christmas Present

 A precious gift appeared on my doorstep, it is one that I adore
My son has come home for Christmas – I can’t wish for anything more!


21st December 2015

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Etienne Lariviere

December 23, 2015 at 3:00 PM

Family is the best gift all, tres bien :)

Jan Allison

December 23, 2015 at 5:27 PM

Most definitely:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

December 23, 2015 at 1:48 AM

That's almost better than filet minion!

Jan Allison

December 23, 2015 at 2:08 AM

Almost but not quite lol:-) hugs Jan:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

December 22, 2015 at 6:35 PM

so cute!!

Jan Allison

December 22, 2015 at 6:42 PM

My Christmas is complete Andrea I have the best gift ever:-) hugs jan xx

Kevin Leake

December 22, 2015 at 2:20 PM

AHH lovely, Merry Christmas to you and your family Jan!! Best Wishes Kevin

Jan Allison

December 22, 2015 at 6:42 PM

No names at the end of your poem - in my last contest you had your names on it - it is not allowed as per a recent rule imposed by soup:_( hugs Jan xx

Kevin Leake

December 22, 2015 at 4:03 PM

Don't understand no name rule. Is that to say using any body's name in your poems Kevin

Jan Allison

December 22, 2015 at 2:38 PM

Thanks Kevin - do have a go at my limerick contest if you have time - remember the no names rule:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

December 22, 2015 at 8:38 AM

I have posted a new poem I would love your feedback.

Jan Allison

December 22, 2015 at 9:22 AM

It will be my pleasure:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

December 22, 2015 at 8:36 AM

Nothing is better, you made me cry Jan because I love this poem with all that is me and I love you in the same way my dear friend. I have to fav this perfect little poem.

Jan Allison

December 22, 2015 at 9:22 AM

I had to write this Armand - Christmas is not about material gifts it is friends and family that count. I have what I want for Christmas my son back home albeit for a few days - he is studying hard whilst he is here but at least he is home:-) love and hugs as ever Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

December 22, 2015 at 5:55 AM

I love this Jan. There is no more precious gift than your children! Beautiful!

Jan Allison

December 22, 2015 at 6:14 AM

We didn't know until Sunday night that he would be coming home for a short time Connie - my Christmas is complete I have the best gift of all:-) hugs Jan xx I hope you have a wonderful time with your loved ones:-)

Seren Roberts

December 21, 2015 at 9:18 PM

Jan so happy for you, enjoy each moment, remember the times that made you smile, write a poem telling us in your usual funny way. Nadolig Llawen......Seren

Jan Allison

December 22, 2015 at 2:05 AM

I have nothing to smile about at PS Seren. I will continue to write but the heart of the community is being ripped to shreds and TPS simply will not listen to concerns :-( Have a wonderful Christmas and a good New year... and in Manx - Nollick Ghennal as Blein Vie Noa:-) hugs Jan xx

Jaycee Cervenka

December 21, 2015 at 8:46 PM

Smiling, my brother has come from half way across the U.S.. It's Nice when family comes home. Enjoy your time with him! Merry Christmas, Jan.

Jan Allison

December 22, 2015 at 2:03 AM

Oh that is wonderful news Jan:-) Have a wonderful family reunion:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars

December 21, 2015 at 8:39 PM

YAY!!! Mrs. Jan's son is in for Christmas!!!Enjoy and relax...:)-luloo

Jan Allison

December 22, 2015 at 2:02 AM

I'm happy LuLoo but my heart has gone from the site as has that of many people:-( hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

December 21, 2015 at 8:07 PM

how wonderful for you! enjoy every minute!

Jan Allison

December 22, 2015 at 2:02 AM

I will Ilene:-) he spent most of yesterday either sleeping or studying but he is home for a few days:-) Hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

December 21, 2015 at 6:18 PM

Great one Jan best gift a mother can have.

Jan Allison

December 21, 2015 at 6:21 PM

Most definitely Michael sadly last Christmas was so traumatic for us as my sons two friends (brothers of 19 and 20) had died in tragic circumstances and my dad was dying of terminal cancer - it will not be easy for us this year but to be together as a family is the best gift possible:-) hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort

December 21, 2015 at 5:56 PM

Yes, it is such a pleasure to have our children near. Have a wonderful holiday and enjoy.

Jan Allison

December 21, 2015 at 6:01 PM

I didn't know until yesterday that he was coming home - my Christmas is complete:-) hugs Jan xx

Frederic Parker

December 21, 2015 at 5:49 PM

pure joy my dear poetic friend..

Jan Allison

December 21, 2015 at 5:56 PM

The joy is all mine Frederic my son was unsure if he was coming home as he has major assignments and exams coming up and he is very focused on his studies:-) He is home but busy studying at the moment but at least we will be together for a few days until he goes back before New Year:-) hugs Jan xx

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