The Berlin Wall

The swirls of freedom’s fervent dreams
On canvas raised in bitter cold
Upon oppression’s wall of screams

A city severed at its seams
Gleaned comfort in art’s bright console 
The swirls of freedom’s fervent dreams

Beyond the walls, a feared regime
With liberty, in stern control
Upon oppression’s wall of screams

The inside; vibrant colors gleam  
Expressions brushed of angst, unfold
The swirls of freedom’s fervent dreams

The gray outside; true evil’s scheme
With barbs of wire ensnaring souls
Upon oppression’s wall of screams

A palisade of painted streams
Immersed in thought – cascading bold 
The swirls of freedom’s fervent dreams
Upon oppression’s wall of screams

~~16 Mar 2016~~

Note –During the later stages of the cold war, the West Berlin
side of the Berlin Wall was an unrestricted outlet for graffiti
artists to express the freedom absent on the other side.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:59 AM
Greetings David. Congrats on your amazing WIN with this write!!! ;-)
Mark Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 2:43 AM
its technically a brilliant write, but the form and format does not allow the reader to feel the enormity, of the wall and what was about to happen to a city, where liberty was at stake... nice read though
Richards Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 5:47 PM
"A city severed at its seams"....wow....that is a brilliant way of putting it !! Excellent work, David !! Congratulations!
Lane Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Well written and congratulations, David.
Nance Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Very well done! Grats on your contest placing :) :)
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