The Bending Tree

"Guts and gain trap your more likely to stand on the hill"
a tree that's now the oldest of ten has become so weathered and oddly thin
but blood continues to flow in every scratched and surface of my skin

Once a growing seedling no weeds would dare crawl in and a stone was cast a back
all my little saplings would love me under the shade like a small animal pack
they knew I would always kneel over them with no form of slack

My branch is starting to bend but calm I stay rooted looking up at the dawn
at ease with a gentle wind my soil now lumpy and dry
no one comes with water to rest my troubled soul or even a word of good-by

You see, sometimes you give and sway no matter the need or strain
but when this old tree is bending low and money is no longer a flow
just a whisper upon my ear gives me the honor for a new branch I may grow.

T Reams   9/9/2015  Contest sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux
    Placed 7th                                        'Who do you think I am'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 1:34 AM
Very wonderful write Tammy! Congrats on a fantastic win!
Reams Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 6:21 PM
Thank you Dr. Upma for the great comment. Have a nice day.
A  Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Hi Tammy, congrats ----- Love SKAT
Reams Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 6:21 PM
Thank you again Skat for the comment. Love back to you.
Tor Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 10:30 PM
Tammy a well deserved win. Congratulations.
Reams Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 6:20 PM
Thank you again Michael for the nice comment.
Rebstock Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 6:13 PM
Lovely, congratulations
Reams Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Thank you for the nice comment Shirley.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 6:10 AM
I enjoyed your poem, thanks for entering my contest.
Reams Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 3:40 PM
Thank you Richard. I was a fun way to right the poetry.
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 10:35 PM
this is beautiful, Tammy. Soupmail.
Reams Avatar
September 11, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Thank you Lady for the nice comment. Have a wonderful day.
A. Sharma Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 2:26 AM
Very lovely Tammy, it inspires the reader to have a positive, youthful and progressive attitude!He will love this, Gl in contest!
Reams Avatar
September 10, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma for the really nice comment.
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