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The Belt of Sorrows

As I add another notch, Into my belt of failures. I did not gain the joy of my heart. And if I had gained, Your honest…true love. I wouldn’t contemplate Using that very belt As a makeshift tourniquet, Around my pleasant dreams. Choking the flow of my tomorrows, To ease the bleak pain, …of not being with you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/3/2010 10:43:00 AM
Sad but also very romantic and nice, Raúl. Enjoyed the read!...Gert
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Date: 9/29/2010 10:20:00 AM
Deep, sad thoughts, Raul. I hope you are in a good place now in your life and doubt your faith would ever allow you to use the belt as a "makeshift tourniquet." I have missed you here and as I prepare to move to NJ (at least for a while - my sister's husband is ill), I am letting friends know I may not be here for a little while. Hope to see you posting some new work again soon. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/11/2010 6:21:00 AM
Enjoyed the reading of your gifted pen ....Glad that I chose this one to read today...Sara
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Date: 9/5/2010 11:18:00 PM
Hi Raul. Haven't seen you doing contests lately. I have been busy with some other life's problems...I like your contests. All the best, iolanda
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Date: 8/28/2010 10:17:00 PM
An excellent expression of emotions Raul... enjoyed your creativity tonight and always.. on this happy weekend with luv..
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Date: 8/23/2010 5:01:00 PM
checking on my own failures. jhl
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Date: 8/23/2010 8:27:00 AM
This poem to choke the flow of tomorrows,to lose and not gain,to not being with that special someone is very emotive and deep. .Glad to see you back. .C.C
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:19:00 AM
Hey Raul!! It has been a long time my friend!! Hope you are well....your poem sounds sad and desperate.... WE still love you!!
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Date: 8/23/2010 5:41:00 AM
I am happy to see you on the soup after a long time. Hope to hear more from you, Raul
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